02-15-2013, 04:27 PM
hmm. maybe its because my interpretation is very undeveloped. i was lead to believe that you just read it based on the breaks and commas, NOT a situation where the reader searches for sentence components and breaks it down in that fashion. i was very aware of the pauses and enjambments i created if following the generic, read as you go understanding. but like i said, i'm very novice in this field and is my second poem i've really written