Emmett: Foxy

[Leanne]

I'm not much of a fan of these gimmicky forms -- a few work reasonably well but I'm not convinced this is one of them. I do like your theme and I think you've made the most of what you're working with, although I don't consider "ing" -- the passive/unstressed syllable -- to be the one to rhyme with. If you've got an "ing", my suggestion will almost always be to go for a perfect double rhyme (leading/reading) or at the very least an off-rhyme (leading/fading).

Sorry I'm not being more supportive of this one, Brandon, it's just not doing a lot for me.