Lipstick Sheep (in my defence)
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lancashire, i'm from stretford, missing hollands meat and potato pies Sad


it's the same with me. and i suspect many others. i can see stuff in other peoples poetry but miss it in my own. i think we're wired up to think....mmm that's a good poem i just wrote Big Grin



ps, it's off, not because of you're accent but because it's off. Hysterical you must be a city fan Big Grin...if it were an odd foot then maybe that would be the case but in some places it's a lot more than that. it's a still a great read. it all depends how great you want it to be Wink
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Lipstick Sheep (in my defence) - by Smiffy - 02-11-2013, 08:06 PM
RE: Lipstick Sheep (in my defence) - by Leanne - 02-12-2013, 05:00 AM
RE: Lipstick Sheep (in my defence) - by Smiffy - 02-12-2013, 07:35 AM
RE: Lipstick Sheep (in my defence) - by billy - 02-12-2013, 04:52 PM
RE: Lipstick Sheep (in my defence) - by Smiffy - 02-13-2013, 07:52 AM
RE: Lipstick Sheep (in my defence) - by billy - 02-13-2013, 08:02 AM
RE: Lipstick Sheep (in my defence) - by Smiffy - 02-13-2013, 04:34 PM
RE: Lipstick Sheep (in my defence) - by billy - 02-17-2013, 06:14 AM
RE: Lipstick Sheep (in my defence) - by richardpoet - 02-16-2013, 11:31 PM
RE: Lipstick Sheep (in my defence) - by Smiffy - 02-17-2013, 05:23 AM



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