Warming Hearts - Edit

[seriouslyme]

Thank you for the comments. I will take what you have suggested and give it some thought. I think I need to stay away from the cliches it seems. Also, I do get caught in saying it directly, opposed to providing an illustration of how it looks or how it feels... not just that it is. I get that now, and see where I get off track. I've been away from writing for almost two years, so it's sometimes a slow climb back.

Thanks again!
Heather