02-11-2013, 04:52 PM
Hi Heslopian,
Thanks for the comments. Good catch on the comma not noticed that one.
I think you are right about the flow. Prob won't work on this for some time, I just wrote something to get me going again, but appreciate the encouragment so perhaps one day i will whip it out of knickers and have another bash at it.
AJ
(sorry that sounds needlssly crude...family saying having spent too long reading Goldilocks and the three little pigs...the maidens' eyelid flickers!)
Thanks for the comments. Good catch on the comma not noticed that one.
I think you are right about the flow. Prob won't work on this for some time, I just wrote something to get me going again, but appreciate the encouragment so perhaps one day i will whip it out of knickers and have another bash at it.
AJ
(sorry that sounds needlssly crude...family saying having spent too long reading Goldilocks and the three little pigs...the maidens' eyelid flickers!)