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Let's fight, let's talk it out, let's mess it up

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02-10-2013, 01:54 AM

Hi Serge,
Is this an edit or a new poem?....either way back on track to form.
Hope to get back to you with some crit / comments later.
AJ

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Let's fight, let's talk it out, let's mess it up - by serge gurkski - 02-09-2013, 09:53 PM

RE: Suddenly the phone rings (warning: is porn) - by Stalker - 02-09-2013, 10:11 PM

RE: Suddenly the phone rings (warning: is porn) - by serge gurkski - 02-09-2013, 10:12 PM

RE: Suddenly the phone rings (warning: is porn) - by cidermaid - 02-09-2013, 10:18 PM

RE: Suddenly the phone rings (warning: is porn) - by Stalker - 02-09-2013, 10:20 PM

RE: Suddenly the phone rings (warning: is porn) - by serge gurkski - 02-09-2013, 10:43 PM

RE: Suddenly the phone rings (warning: is porn) - by serge gurkski - 02-10-2013, 01:48 AM

RE: Suddenly the phone rings (warning: is porn) - by cidermaid - 02-10-2013, 01:54 AM

RE: Suddenly the phone rings (warning: is porn) - by serge gurkski - 02-10-2013, 02:01 AM

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