02-10-2013, 01:48 AM
Lucy and Cider:
You were dead right! took me sometime to realize.
So ... thanks for commenting.
This is what I will keep for another poem:
Boudoir boogie
Suddenly the Phone rings.
No coitus interruptus please!
rev 1 btw will become part 2 of Blue Lament. Just adopted it. I call my Oliver Twist.
cheers serge (I more ressemble Uriah Heep, darn it ,-)
But please don't be mean and correct me and say: Ebenezer Scrooge
unless ..........
kinky rules. (goes without saying)
You were dead right! took me sometime to realize.
So ... thanks for commenting.
This is what I will keep for another poem:
Boudoir boogie
Suddenly the Phone rings.
No coitus interruptus please!
rev 1 btw will become part 2 of Blue Lament. Just adopted it. I call my Oliver Twist.
cheers serge (I more ressemble Uriah Heep, darn it ,-)
But please don't be mean and correct me and say: Ebenezer Scrooge
unless ..........
kinky rules. (goes without saying)