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First Poem that Impacted You

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02-09-2013, 11:32 AM

The second strophe is great. I love the "we all hate home"

I also enjoyed the idea of a life reprehensibly perfect.

I can see why you liked it.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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First Poem that Impacted You - by Todd - 02-07-2013, 01:17 PM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by hamartia - 02-09-2013, 10:41 AM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by Todd - 02-09-2013, 11:32 AM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by billy - 02-11-2013, 11:51 AM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by Leanne - 02-11-2013, 12:06 PM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by heslopian - 02-11-2013, 12:25 PM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by billy - 02-11-2013, 12:27 PM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by Leanne - 02-11-2013, 12:43 PM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by serge gurkski - 02-12-2013, 01:52 AM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by billy - 02-12-2013, 12:11 PM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by Leanne - 02-12-2013, 03:21 PM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by billy - 02-12-2013, 03:35 PM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by Leanne - 02-12-2013, 04:42 PM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by billy - 02-12-2013, 04:53 PM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by Smiffy - 02-13-2013, 08:16 AM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by brandontoh - 02-13-2013, 11:11 AM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by hobbit86 - 02-13-2013, 11:16 AM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by justcloudy - 04-08-2013, 09:36 PM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by rayheinrich - 04-08-2013, 10:17 PM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by Crepuscule - 04-09-2013, 10:49 PM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by Strottenburg - 05-12-2013, 01:51 PM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by Brownlie - 05-13-2013, 02:11 AM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by Keith - 06-05-2013, 08:42 AM

RE: First Poem that Impacted You - by Rose Love - 06-05-2013, 06:32 PM

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