Monsoon Song

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Thanks Heslopian for the read and comment.

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I really enjoyed this, many beautiful lines. I feel that that the tone and pace capture the tranquil, idyllic quality of village/rural life. It's just turned monsoon soon season here and I'm all romantic about it; your poem evokes the feeling of a light spring frolic, which I do feel.

Thanks Mr. Shankly for the read and comment. Enjoy your monsoon.