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Monsoon Song
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02-08-2013, 08:25 PM
I really enjoyed this, many beautiful lines. I feel that that the tone and pace capture the tranquil, idyllic quality of village/rural life. It's just turned monsoon soon season here and I'm all romantic about it; your poem evokes the feeling of a light spring frolic, which I do feel.
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Monsoon Song - by lolo - 02-08-2013, 06:14 PM
RE: Monsoon Song - by billy - 02-08-2013, 06:32 PM
RE: Monsoon Song - by lolo - 02-08-2013, 08:01 PM
RE: Monsoon Song - by Mr. Shankly - 02-08-2013, 08:25 PM
RE: Monsoon Song - by heslopian - 02-08-2013, 09:47 PM
RE: Monsoon Song - by lolo - 02-08-2013, 11:40 PM
RE: Monsoon Song - by Todd - 02-08-2013, 11:43 PM
RE: Monsoon Song - by lolo - 02-09-2013, 01:05 AM
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