02-07-2013, 06:40 AM
A surreal imagistic poem which I found easier to read once I accepted that it was toying with my expectations. The only line which still confounds me is the second of verse two. I have no idea what you mean there. The third and fourth verses are my favourites. I like how the poem draws a lot of material from a guy lying around probably jerking off in his sleep. Thank you for the read
P.S: It's good to hear your voice People's voices never sound like what I think they will.
P.S: It's good to hear your voice
People's voices never sound like what I think they will.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe