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the mad
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02-06-2013, 04:26 PM
I can't listen to the audio yet because people are sleeping, but when I read I noticed the way you made words float off and into each other from line to line. In some places though, it seems a little forced, which could be the effect your going for, it just feels wrong in my head.
I'll be there in a minute.
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the mad - by rowens - 09-05-2012, 05:01 AM
RE: the mad - by rowens - 02-04-2013, 11:23 PM
RE: the mad - by serge gurkski - 02-06-2013, 07:50 PM
RE: the mad - by cidermaid - 02-05-2013, 02:24 AM
RE: the mad - by rowens - 02-05-2013, 03:06 AM
RE: the mad - by cidermaid - 02-05-2013, 03:49 AM
RE: the mad - by rowens - 02-05-2013, 04:14 AM
RE: the mad - by cidermaid - 02-05-2013, 07:47 AM
RE: the mad - by billy - 02-07-2013, 08:20 AM
RE: the mad - by rowens - 02-05-2013, 07:50 AM
RE: the mad - by newsclippings - 02-06-2013, 04:26 PM
RE: the mad - by rowens - 02-06-2013, 10:59 PM
RE: the mad - by Leanne - 02-07-2013, 07:17 AM
RE: the mad - by serge gurkski - 02-07-2013, 07:56 AM
RE: the mad - by serge gurkski - 02-07-2013, 10:31 AM
RE: the mad - by rowens - 02-07-2013, 10:18 PM
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