Gone
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I think this is a good start to a really good poem. The problem with it is that I think this emotion has been conveyed too many times.. you're angry and bitter about a person. I say go somewhere else with it. Surprise us.
I'll be there in a minute.
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Gone - by Largeblzr - 02-06-2013, 11:07 AM
RE: Gone - by brandontoh - 02-06-2013, 03:43 PM
RE: Gone - by newsclippings - 02-06-2013, 04:16 PM



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