Heart on Fire, Soul a Cliche
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Even though it's meant to be cliche, I really love the 7th stanza. The only thing that kills me is the second line...it's almost too cliche for me. Still, for a poem of cliches, I found some parts that really resonated with me, so that's very impressive. :)
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Heart on Fire, Soul a Cliche - by brandontoh - 02-05-2013, 12:54 PM
RE: Heart on Fire, Soul a Cliche - by Todd - 02-06-2013, 12:21 PM
RE: Heart on Fire, Soul a Cliche - by AisforApple - 02-06-2013, 02:05 PM
RE: Heart on Fire, Soul a Cliche - by brandontoh - 02-06-2013, 04:45 PM
RE: Heart on Fire, Soul a Cliche - by Bizzy - 02-07-2013, 07:29 PM
RE: Heart on Fire, Soul a Cliche - by brandontoh - 02-09-2013, 04:34 PM



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