02-06-2013, 01:54 PM
(02-06-2013, 01:40 PM)Todd Wrote: To be honest Jonathan I find the sentiment a little creepy. If that's what you were going for you nailed the vibe. I kept wanting to agree with the assumption of the person who left that the speaker is weak. When I got to once I'm inside your wounds will heal it reminded me of adolescent 1970s pulp stories where the hero brings sexual healing to the repressed lover. Those were my takeaways.Well unfortunately creepy wasn't what I was going for. I was about to explain the story but I quickly remembered that we're not allowed to do that in the forum. Anywho I do thank you for taking the time to read this piece. ^_^