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To And From My Beating Heart
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02-06-2013, 01:40 PM
To be honest Jonathan I find the sentiment a little creepy. If that's what you were going for you nailed the vibe. I kept wanting to agree with the assumption of the person who left that the speaker is weak. When I got to once I'm inside your wounds will heal it reminded me of adolescent 1970s pulp stories where the hero brings sexual healing to the repressed lover. Those were my takeaways.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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To And From My Beating Heart - by jonathan1787 - 02-06-2013, 01:09 PM
RE: To And From My Beating Heart - by Todd - 02-06-2013, 01:40 PM
RE: To And From My Beating Heart - by jonathan1787 - 02-06-2013, 01:54 PM
RE: To And From My Beating Heart - by brandontoh - 02-06-2013, 03:54 PM
RE: To And From My Beating Heart - by jonathan1787 - 02-07-2013, 05:34 AM
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