02-06-2013, 12:21 PM
Hey Brandon,
I've been reading this for awhile. I think I see an angle you could take.
Cliche
Cliche
Cliche
Break out of it with something incisive
Rinse, repeat
You sort of do that now with the polishing nails and how the rays sting.
Just a thought but going from surface to killer imagery back to surface would be a nice twist.
I've been reading this for awhile. I think I see an angle you could take.
Cliche
Cliche
Cliche
Break out of it with something incisive
Rinse, repeat
You sort of do that now with the polishing nails and how the rays sting.
Just a thought but going from surface to killer imagery back to surface would be a nice twist.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson