The Night Poetry Died
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Smile awesome read! There are a few punctuational mistakes, but those could be intentional or due simply to informality. The last line struck a chord with me, in particular. It reminded me of the quote from sigmund freud: "sometimes, a cigar is just a cigar." Totally not the same meaning in your poem, but it just brought me back to that quote is all.
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The Night Poetry Died - by Todd - 11-10-2012, 10:16 AM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by Leanne - 11-10-2012, 10:51 AM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by addy - 11-10-2012, 03:06 PM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by billy - 11-10-2012, 03:31 PM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by Todd - 11-11-2012, 12:55 AM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by Rose Love - 11-11-2012, 08:07 PM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by Todd - 11-11-2012, 11:37 PM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by abu nuwas - 01-12-2013, 08:13 AM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by Todd - 01-15-2013, 08:34 AM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by tectak - 01-15-2013, 09:06 AM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by Todd - 01-15-2013, 10:39 AM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by monablackbird - 01-15-2013, 10:27 PM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by Todd - 01-15-2013, 11:11 PM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by Jae Mc Donnell - 01-16-2013, 08:22 AM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by Todd - 01-17-2013, 01:59 AM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by heslopian - 02-03-2013, 10:29 PM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by ellz483 - 02-04-2013, 02:40 PM
RE: The Night Poetry Died - by Todd - 02-06-2013, 07:13 AM



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