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A Perilous Liaison
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01-29-2013, 06:14 PM
I am sympathetic to the basic idea that under-pinning this poem. Also, I really enjoyed some lines, for instance, "cemented in trust." Still, I can't help but feel that some element is missing. I don't sincerely feel the affair between the protagonists, some of the words feel a bit forced which detracts from the overall content of the poem (at least for me).
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A Perilous Liaison - by Pete Ak - 01-26-2013, 02:45 AM
RE: A Perilous Liaison - by Leanne - 01-26-2013, 06:13 AM
RE: A Perilous Liaison - by Pete Ak - 01-26-2013, 10:05 PM
RE: A Perilous Liaison - by Leanne - 01-27-2013, 06:18 AM
RE: A Perilous Liaison - by tectak - 01-29-2013, 01:44 AM
RE: A Perilous Liaison - by Mr. Shankly - 01-29-2013, 06:14 PM
RE: A Perilous Liaison - by Pete Ak - 01-30-2013, 05:50 PM
RE: A Perilous Liaison - by tectak - 01-30-2013, 07:11 PM
RE: A Perilous Liaison - by Stalker - 01-30-2013, 08:16 PM
RE: A Perilous Liaison - by tectak - 01-30-2013, 09:37 PM
RE: A Perilous Liaison - by Pete Ak - 01-31-2013, 04:38 AM
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