01-29-2013, 10:05 AM
I like the idea of this poem...It reads nicely but i think you need to touch it up a little.
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Poem- any comments welcome!
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Poem- any comments welcome! - by Rowan - 01-29-2013, 12:01 AM
RE: Poem- any comments welcome! - by rowens - 01-29-2013, 12:10 AM
RE: Poem- any comments welcome! - by rowens - 01-29-2013, 07:59 AM
RE: Poem- any comments welcome! - by Hidrolic - 01-29-2013, 10:05 AM
RE: Poem- any comments welcome! - by brandontoh - 01-29-2013, 03:45 PM
RE: Poem- any comments welcome! - by billy - 01-29-2013, 05:17 PM
RE: Poem- any comments welcome! - by Rowan - 01-29-2013, 07:40 PM
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