Poem- any comments welcome!
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Something I want to read and think about again later. To see if I have any new thoughts or feelings. Seems like it could use a little more work. Another run through, or a couple. Why? I'm not sure yet. A few things feel a little off. But not by much at all. I'll have to think about it. It seems pretty good to me.
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Poem- any comments welcome! - by Rowan - 01-29-2013, 12:01 AM
RE: Poem- any comments welcome! - by rowens - 01-29-2013, 12:10 AM
RE: Poem- any comments welcome! - by rowens - 01-29-2013, 07:59 AM
RE: Poem- any comments welcome! - by Hidrolic - 01-29-2013, 10:05 AM
RE: Poem- any comments welcome! - by brandontoh - 01-29-2013, 03:45 PM
RE: Poem- any comments welcome! - by billy - 01-29-2013, 05:17 PM
RE: Poem- any comments welcome! - by Rowan - 01-29-2013, 07:40 PM



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