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In Defense of the Cold Ones
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01-28-2013, 03:41 PM
Hello cotidiano, the imagery here is really strong, but, having said that, I would probably only keep the first, second and last stanza as I feel it would make it a tighter poem and give it more impact. Only my opinion though, I enjoyed the poem very much, great stuff! Cheers.
Oh what a wicket web we weave!
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In Defense of the Cold Ones - by cotidiano - 01-26-2013, 08:21 AM
RE: In Defense of the Cold Ones - by rowens - 01-26-2013, 11:52 AM
RE: In Defense of the Cold Ones - by cotidiano - 01-27-2013, 04:21 AM
RE: In Defense of the Cold Ones - by Pete Ak - 01-28-2013, 04:23 AM
RE: In Defense of the Cold Ones - by cotidiano - 01-28-2013, 03:32 PM
RE: In Defense of the Cold Ones - by Pete Ak - 01-28-2013, 05:03 PM
RE: In Defense of the Cold Ones - by brandontoh - 01-28-2013, 03:10 PM
RE: In Defense of the Cold Ones - by cotidiano - 01-28-2013, 03:42 PM
RE: In Defense of the Cold Ones - by popeye - 01-28-2013, 03:41 PM
RE: In Defense of the Cold Ones - by brandontoh - 01-28-2013, 03:45 PM
RE: In Defense of the Cold Ones - by Hidrolic - 01-29-2013, 11:55 PM
RE: In Defense of the Cold Ones - by Leanne - 01-30-2013, 05:20 AM
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