To Dakhla-Par Avion

[tectak]

Your poem paints a lovely picture. I realize that my knowledge of poetry is too limited to offer any real critique--Damn you undergraduate degree in politics--I'll guess have to spend more time reading the responses of others.

Thank you ,sar, for reading this.
The whole thing was made easier because it is true. I guess that might dissuade the veritas-verse brigade from making contradictions but it shouldn't stop you or anyone expressing opinions on the piece. Your opinions are as valid as anyone's and as welcome.
Best,
tectak