01-26-2013, 06:09 AM
This oblivion is a lot less harsh than the oblivion I dread, and sometimes hope for. Maybe the speaker is there, or maybe not quite yet.
There isn't anything. And so I wouldn't expect you to describe anything. So it makes the poem hard to say anything bad about.
It sets up a contradiction. And that's fine. I wonder what your other poems are like.
There isn't anything. And so I wouldn't expect you to describe anything. So it makes the poem hard to say anything bad about.
It sets up a contradiction. And that's fine. I wonder what your other poems are like.