01-26-2013, 04:05 AM
Hey guys,
this is my first English poem
Thanks for some feedback!!!
Story of Life
Heaven´s utmost creation,
The most sensitive sensation,
The hardest to wield,
One´s feelings concealed.
Off to find heaven´s chest,
No longer able to be self-possessed,
Human kind´s inherent quest,
No time to rest.
Fleeting, boundless, never-ending,
Thus, two people depending.
this is my first English poem
Thanks for some feedback!!!Story of Life
Heaven´s utmost creation,
The most sensitive sensation,
The hardest to wield,
One´s feelings concealed.
Off to find heaven´s chest,
No longer able to be self-possessed,
Human kind´s inherent quest,
No time to rest.
Fleeting, boundless, never-ending,
Thus, two people depending.
