What do you think of my first ever poem?

What do you think of my first ever poem?

chris89
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01-24-2013, 04:55 PM

Dann that's amazing lol yeah that's right she wrote a poem like when she's sees me walk her way a rush comes over her like panic. I don't if its for me and this poem isn't directed to her directly but maybe she understand s it I hope. Smile

Any advice?

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What do you think of my first ever poem? - by chris89 - 01-23-2013, 08:58 AM

RE: What do you think of my first ever poem? - by doolasmind#11 - 01-23-2013, 11:57 AM

RE: What do you think of my first ever poem? - by chris89 - 01-24-2013, 03:11 PM

RE: What do you think of my first ever poem? - by doolasmind#11 - 01-24-2013, 04:52 PM

RE: What do you think of my first ever poem? - by chris89 - 01-24-2013, 04:55 PM

RE: What do you think of my first ever poem? - by doolasmind#11 - 01-25-2013, 02:41 AM

RE: What do you think of my first ever poem? - by chris89 - 01-25-2013, 03:51 AM

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