01-24-2013, 12:22 AM
(01-23-2013, 10:06 PM)rowens Wrote: All of the sentences don't have to run-on from line to line.alright, all that is noted, what did you think about the content though? was it too cryptic?
It's just that you can make it feel like what you're saying is being expressed naturally, and not being dictated by the form you're writing in. That way, the form and the subject seem to go naturally together. So neither is forcing the other.
"Life is a dream for the wise, a game for the fool, a comedy for the rich, a tragedy for the poor."-Sholom Aleichem

