The Reaping
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(01-23-2013, 10:06 PM)rowens Wrote:  All of the sentences don't have to run-on from line to line.

It's just that you can make it feel like what you're saying is being expressed naturally, and not being dictated by the form you're writing in. That way, the form and the subject seem to go naturally together. So neither is forcing the other.
alright, all that is noted, what did you think about the content though? was it too cryptic?
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The Reaping - by doolasmind#11 - 01-23-2013, 04:59 AM
RE: The Reaping - by rowens - 01-23-2013, 05:42 AM
RE: The Reaping - by doolasmind#11 - 01-23-2013, 08:21 AM
RE: The Reaping - by rowens - 01-23-2013, 11:41 AM
RE: The Reaping - by doolasmind#11 - 01-23-2013, 11:49 AM
RE: The Reaping - by rowens - 01-23-2013, 10:06 PM
RE: The Reaping - by doolasmind#11 - 01-24-2013, 12:22 AM
RE: The Reaping - by rowens - 01-24-2013, 12:30 AM



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