The Reaping
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Does it have a metre?

And it's best to try to make the lines flow into each other, instead of just being stacked one under the other.

So the content and its expression form a unified effect..

If you see what I mean.
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The Reaping - by doolasmind#11 - 01-23-2013, 04:59 AM
RE: The Reaping - by rowens - 01-23-2013, 05:42 AM
RE: The Reaping - by doolasmind#11 - 01-23-2013, 08:21 AM
RE: The Reaping - by rowens - 01-23-2013, 11:41 AM
RE: The Reaping - by doolasmind#11 - 01-23-2013, 11:49 AM
RE: The Reaping - by rowens - 01-23-2013, 10:06 PM
RE: The Reaping - by doolasmind#11 - 01-24-2013, 12:22 AM
RE: The Reaping - by rowens - 01-24-2013, 12:30 AM



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