Perpetual Cycles
#4
Some lines really work poorly while others work great.

A child is born but has yet to make
A soul with the mold yet to make

Opposites notice so tension brews
Energy is idle power minus a fuse

Love is lost, tolerance with it
Shaky relations start to fidget

These seem really weak to me.
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Perpetual Cycles - by doolasmind#11 - 01-22-2013, 08:57 AM
RE: Perpetual Cycles - by brandontoh - 01-22-2013, 01:43 PM
RE: Perpetual Cycles - by doolasmind#11 - 01-22-2013, 01:50 PM
RE: Perpetual Cycles - by Pigler - 01-22-2013, 03:19 PM
RE: Perpetual Cycles - by brandontoh - 01-22-2013, 03:41 PM
RE: Perpetual Cycles - by corawrites - 01-24-2013, 12:53 PM
RE: Perpetual Cycles - by doolasmind#11 - 01-24-2013, 04:58 PM



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