01-22-2013, 01:43 PM
(01-22-2013, 01:39 PM)brandontoh Wrote: Just a little bump. I hope it's not against the rules. Please don't whack me with the infamous ban hammer. D:hahahahaha nice
i think its really abstract i mean i get the whole first stanza about seeing, touching and feeling but i am confused when you say
One,
By habit. By circumstance.
With tenderness of air.
With sky as roof, grass as bed.
One,
Thinking of another,
Is that loneliness?
are you trying to say that the senses are independent of each other and individually they are lonely?
"Life is a dream for the wise, a game for the fool, a comedy for the rich, a tragedy for the poor."-Sholom Aleichem