[Revision] The War Within

[Leanne]

You haven't done anything wrong, it's just easier for future commenters if they can see what they might have said last time. You can always put a link in to your previous thread (you can find out how to do that here) or alternatively, you can PM a mod and we'll copy or move the whole thread to another forum.

For now, I'm just going to put a link in to your original poem