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First poem ever!

Jae Mc Donnell Offline

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01-22-2013, 05:01 AM

burka: hello, how are things?
I have to say, for a first attempt this is really good. I like the title and the poem that follows. I get your meaning, so all in all, good job Smile

keep it up

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First poem ever! - by burka - 01-22-2013, 03:20 AM

RE: First poem ever! - by corawrites - 01-22-2013, 04:08 AM

RE: First poem ever! - by burka - 01-22-2013, 04:37 AM

RE: First poem ever! - by Jae Mc Donnell - 01-22-2013, 05:01 AM

RE: First poem ever! - by burka - 01-23-2013, 07:26 AM

RE: First poem ever! - by Jagger Cyde - 01-22-2013, 05:58 AM

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