First poem ever!

[burka]

This is the first thing I've ever written and I just wanted some general feedback, thanks!

transition

Not if
but when I
have to go, please
give me a
warning
and just a little
while,
because to leave
everything and
everyone behind
with no time for
“remember when"
"I love you"
or "I'm sorry"
would be infinitely
worse than any
crash
accident
or coronary artery atheroma.

To leave the
party without
saying thank you
would just
be terribly rude.