Per cogitandi, libertatem ( or Lingua in Maxillam)
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(01-20-2013, 09:57 PM)sar Wrote:  The language strikes me as being, overall, juvenile.
Perhaps you are right....but could you say why? In an adult way, of course.
I will adjust to suit if you make a good case but this kind of crit says very little of consequence and I am very open to serious suggestions.
Best and thank you,
tectak
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RE: Per cogitandi, libertatem ( or Lingua in Maxillam) - by tectak - 01-21-2013, 01:12 AM



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