01-21-2013, 12:54 AM
It uses nice devices. Some of the lines don't flow well because you leave an obvious word like 'a' or 'an' or 'the' out.
It doesn't say very much. Or, it says something, but it says something very simple in a very complicated way.
Maybe you could say something about the content compared with the style.
It doesn't say very much. Or, it says something, but it says something very simple in a very complicated way.
Maybe you could say something about the content compared with the style.