Meeting Katherine part 1

[Todd]

well, as you seem to reject all critique (maybe posted it in the wrong place, is all), I kinda like it...

You know Sonata, I think Shem has a point. What exactly were you looking for by way of critique? You weren't concerned about grammar? What exactly did you hope to get out of the workshop?

The poem needs help I'll grant you, but if you're mostly interested in defending why you wrote it--there's little point to wasting anyone's time.