Lamplight

[Smiffy]

the second stanza has a bit of redundancy, but I still kind of like it?
I think there's something interesting about a delicate woman also being aware of how gorgeous she is, and you being afraid to break her I presume? Or maybe kill her innocence...?
Hum. The first stanza is extremely well written in my opinion.

But I have a question, is this girl innocent or is she a narcissist?
And how could you be worse than her if it's the latter?

definitely not an innocent, narcissist, never thought of her that way but she sure was and still is the most important thing in her life after money, never hers always someone else's. Cheers for reading and replying, just getting a feel for the forum, looking good so far.