01-18-2013, 03:53 AM
the second stanza has a bit of redundancy, but I still kind of like it?
I think there's something interesting about a delicate woman also being aware of how gorgeous she is, and you being afraid to break her I presume? Or maybe kill her innocence...?
Hum. The first stanza is extremely well written in my opinion.
But I have a question, is this girl innocent or is she a narcissist?
And how could you be worse than her if it's the latter?
I think there's something interesting about a delicate woman also being aware of how gorgeous she is, and you being afraid to break her I presume? Or maybe kill her innocence...?
Hum. The first stanza is extremely well written in my opinion.
But I have a question, is this girl innocent or is she a narcissist?
And how could you be worse than her if it's the latter?
I'll be there in a minute.