Reflections

[tectak]

Shattered mirrors
Scattered images

Broken hearts

Reflections

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OR

Shattered glass.
Scattered images.

Broken mirror.

Reflections.

Way too long. Terse-verse really needs to say a geat deal in a few words, or something worth saying in a few more. This is neither a condensate nor a revelation. The whole thing is a cliche from start to finish and is indicative of lack of effort. I have to ask....are you seriously expecting a critique? Frankly, I find this offends me.
Sorry,
Best,
tectak