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Reflections
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01-17-2013, 11:34 PM
The first one has a more figurative meaning to it, while the second one has a more literal meaning. That's my interpretation, at least. Honestly, with the poem(s) 7 words long, it is hard to give a thorough critique on it. I do like your choice of words though; 'shattered', 'scattered' and 'broken' all work really well in the imagery of the poem. Once again, there's not much to seriously critique.
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Reflections - by nothing_good16 - 01-16-2013, 04:11 AM
RE: Reflections - by rowens - 01-16-2013, 05:20 AM
RE: Reflections - by brandontoh - 01-17-2013, 11:34 PM
RE: Reflections - by tectak - 01-18-2013, 01:00 AM
RE: Reflections - by rowens - 01-18-2013, 01:03 AM
RE: Reflections - by Card - 01-18-2013, 03:19 AM
RE: Reflections - by shemthepenman - 01-18-2013, 06:33 AM
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