01-16-2013, 11:34 PM
Evocative and full of great imagery. Love the idea of plastic pain. Very nice. I think I might cut "gradually" from that line towards the end. It breaks the flow for me. Just a thought. Well done! 
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Reflections (option #2)--Reflection Cycle - by nothing_good16 - 01-16-2013, 06:06 AM
RE: Reflections (option #2)--Reflection Cycle - by rowens - 01-16-2013, 06:18 AM
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RE: Reflections (option #2)--Reflection Cycle - by monablackbird - 01-16-2013, 11:34 PM
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