01-16-2013, 11:52 AM
What a mess.
Make that face I hate.
The same ten muscles
for the same damn reasons.
What a fool.
A fish on a line.
A line without end
or at least for a while.
What a show.
Come one, come all!
See the neutered mind
with no fear left to know.
What a mess.
Taking my chances.
Without subscription
I'll never know what I've missed.
--
I tried to structure this more. Any advice?
Make that face I hate.
The same ten muscles
for the same damn reasons.
What a fool.
A fish on a line.
A line without end
or at least for a while.
What a show.
Come one, come all!
See the neutered mind
with no fear left to know.
What a mess.
Taking my chances.
Without subscription
I'll never know what I've missed.
--
I tried to structure this more. Any advice?

