(01-15-2013, 09:20 PM)newsclippings Wrote: Fascinating, i found this very easy to slip through-- the poem is a rhythm. I actually just read it the first time without understanding a single thing (the words were pretty).Not completely off at all
I'm actually terrible at critical thinking... but I'm going to tell you that I like the allusion to the seven deadly sins -- is that somehow related to writing (as a profession)? Am I completely off? Wooftie.
Perhaps another few reads.
Don't worry if all you get is a general impression -- I don't believe poems should be riddles, so whatever you take from it is good enough. Thank you!(01-16-2013, 01:16 AM)rowens Wrote: I think all your poems should have an audio attached. I liked reading this out loud myself, I used my Braveheart voice.You have a Braveheart voice? That must be... interesting
It only works if you paint your face with woad, you know.
It could be worse
