01-16-2013, 01:39 AM
I like this a lot. There are some amazing lines in there that I could read a few times and not tire of. Funny though, it actually makes me prickle a little. I think that's because it feels like a battle between superficial gender identity instead of against what I see as the main antagonist - consumerism or capitalist lifestyles or whatever. Not that the prickle is a bad thing at all. Poems are supposed to evoke, right?
Overall, I think it's wonderful, entertaining, and well written.
Overall, I think it's wonderful, entertaining, and well written.

