Reflection

[monablackbird]

I'm a born hopeful romantic who has been at times clothed in the robes of a cynic. So, I love this piece. I also like what Rowens said about awkwardness and I agree. The poem is awkward but that works to its advantage. I tend to really like awkward things so in my book that's a compliment. I'm thinking you could strip some words from this. Then again, I tend to be heavy on brevity sometimes, so that's only from my perspective. Just a thought of course. Can't wait to read more from you.

Best,
Mona