01-15-2013, 10:33 PM
Hey there! This was really cool. You've got some great lines in there like "drinking a coke that's laced". Very nice. I think though that this feels like two poems and you could probably split them at the line "I know you're imperfect, and I accept you that way.". Maybe. It's just a thought. Either way, I dig it. Thanks for the read. 