01-14-2013, 12:25 PM
Thanks for your feedback, Heart. I agree with you about the big wall of text. I wasn't sure about how to space it. You said some lines ran on; any in particular? Perhaps I could condense it.
Here's my bio!
http://pigpenpoetry.com/Thread-Ayyy?pid=...#pid111236
http://pigpenpoetry.com/Thread-Ayyy?pid=...#pid111236

