01-14-2013, 08:29 AM
i just read the thread, (will get back to leave some feedback on the poem after some breakfast)
one question was why do we say "it needs grammar" when it's a free verse poem.
my reaon is this, syntax. if you write a line that has no comma mid sentence, and the read is jerky.
if adding grammar improves the piece. generally if it's a form i leave feedback as to where it shifted off a form.
this isn't so easy with free verse. in general if a poem works without gramma i don't say anything. again, it comes down to leanne's poetic sentence,
one question was why do we say "it needs grammar" when it's a free verse poem.
my reaon is this, syntax. if you write a line that has no comma mid sentence, and the read is jerky.
if adding grammar improves the piece. generally if it's a form i leave feedback as to where it shifted off a form.
this isn't so easy with free verse. in general if a poem works without gramma i don't say anything. again, it comes down to leanne's poetic sentence,