Reflection
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It was but it read very rough and i didnt like it so I cut it out.. I'm still editing the poem. I kind of came up with it last night while I was drinking and listening to a lot of coldplay lol. Once I finish it ill edit my original post. For some reason it wouldn't let me put my post as one on this phone

I can see your point, Card. I've read a lot of poems that had too much of it but as you've said in moderation they can work really. Thanks for taking the time to post. I appreciate you as well, arbil
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Messages In This Thread
Reflection - by jferrell - 01-13-2013, 05:37 PM
RE: Reflection - by arbil_poieo - 01-13-2013, 06:21 PM
RE: Reflection - by jferrell - 01-13-2013, 06:31 PM
RE: Reflection - by arbil_poieo - 01-13-2013, 06:47 PM
RE: Reflection - by Card - 01-14-2013, 04:08 AM
RE: Reflection - by jferrell - 01-13-2013, 06:57 PM
RE: Reflection - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 01:50 AM
RE: Reflection - by jferrell - 01-14-2013, 02:55 AM
RE: Reflection - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 03:44 AM
RE: Reflection - by jferrell - 01-14-2013, 04:09 AM
RE: Reflection - by jferrell - 01-14-2013, 12:25 PM
RE: Reflection - by monablackbird - 01-16-2013, 12:15 AM
RE: Reflection - by jferrell - 01-16-2013, 09:02 AM
RE: Reflection - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 01:14 AM
RE: Reflection - by newsclippings - 01-17-2013, 01:36 AM
RE: Reflection - by jferrell - 01-17-2013, 11:30 AM



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