01-14-2013, 03:44 AM
It's just the character of the speaker. It's a painful and awkward situation; and it comes off well. Though it's just a natural thing, a natural way of dealing with the whole thing in words. It works for me in this particular poem for that reason. The sentiment, the frustration, and all that stuff.
And that part below the line,
that's still the poem going on, right?
And that part below the line,
that's still the poem going on, right?
